The WEA students soaked up the spaciousness of the Botanic Gardens in
the middle of Sydney, on their ginko. We’d had several heatwaves, at last some
cool weather!
Gawaine Powell Davies wrote this:
Someone
Splashed paint
On those leaves
We
wandered towards the bamboo groves near the pond.
kisses under
the bamboo?
JAC loves MEL
Diana
I
liked Gay’s approach, which was to respond to the gardens with drawings. In the
spirit of first impressions (impressionism?) I wrote a very minimalist
pink on blue
on green on
sunlighted bamboo
I
think this suffers from what some people don’t like about haiku: it is a bit
thin.
Just
now, the birds were singing,
And I
was here,
Writing
this.
And
Jan said, when we’d finished, “Wow! I haven’t felt this peaceful for a long
time.”
My
senryu:
commentary train
an English accent talks of
Aborigines
Well,
this is the modern world! We are from everywhere, and a Botanic gardens
contains plants from everywhere.
Final
words from Trisha, on the study part of the course. We had read a Santoka
haiku. She said, “It’s so beautiful it touches me inside – how can I explain
how it makes me feel?”
And
about the gardens, she said, “This is a magical place”.
Look at that!
I want to say –
divine lotus flowers
Diana
My
next course with the WEA starts on Monday May 1st. It will again be
a 5-week course, 9:30 am to 11:30 am. See the WEA website for details.
the ibis chick
shrieks about starvation
Mum honks back
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